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Mr. Khan’s Review on Digest Writer (2014)

A review on Pakistani drama series, Digest Writer (2014). This TV series is directed by Ahmed Kamran and written by Madiha Shahid. Digest Writer stars Saba Qamar in the lead role and in 2014, was aired on Hum TV.

+ Crew

  • Directed by Ahmed Kamran
  • Written by Madiha Shahid
  • Produced by Larachi Entertainment

+ Note

The drama series dives into the bizarre, corrupt world of writing where egos play a key role in politics of the entertainment industry. Although the title of the show is Digest Writer, the show primarily focuses on the show business side of writing. The plot also indulges in the misogyny and family pressures that women have to face and eventually overcome those obstacles.

 + Main Cast

  1. Saba Qamar as Fareeda/Rashk-e-Hina
  2. Gohar Rasheed as Shaukat
  3. Maheen Khalid Rizvi as Jameela
  4. Khalid Ahmed as Mazhar Hayat
  5. Zhalay Sarhadi as Rida Anmol
  6. Farhan Ali Agha as Sikandar
  7. Aiman Khan as Shakeela
  8. Kashif Mehmood as Ayaan Junaid
  9. Agha Ali as Sheheryar

+ Plot

Fareeda comes from a lower, middle class part of society who loves to write stories but is too afraid to share her passion with her family due to their conservative values. Eventually, she gains enough courage to submit her story to a local Urdu Digest and becomes an overnight sensation. With success in her storytelling abilities, the opportunity of a lifetime comes knocking at Fareeda’s door…

+ High Points

i – The drama series has a very intriguing premise. It is a case study of a talented young woman who has a knack for great storytelling. Because of her success as a Digest Writer, she is elevated to writing TV series scripts and from there on, the show becomes meta commentary on show business itself. And of course, with quick success comes jealousy and sabotage. Digest Writer does a good introspection of how show business in Pakistan works and what lies beneath the facade of visual storytelling.

ii – Even when the drama is struggling to be coherent with its storytelling, Saba Qamar as Fareeda is always the highlight of the show. With each passing episode, you can notice the evolution of Fareeda growing more bitter and numb to the abuse she has to face from her family and her bosses. Saba Qamar was casted perfectly as the naive, wonder eyed writer and proved to be a memorable role for her career.

iii – For the most part, the show is bitter and pessimistic but it perfectly encapsulates the world of show business. Throughout the series, we see Fareeda’s naivety being destroyed in front of her eyes, where “you should never meet your heroes” rings true like never before. Fareeda finds herself in a situation where she is forced into making sacrifices for the sake of her loved ones in order to maintain stability within her family life. Success is not all glitz and glamour, it has a dark underbelly that we do not get to see often in Pakistani dramas and for the most part, Digest Writer encapsulates it quite well.

iv – What I really appreciate is the visual differences you see of Fareeda throughout the series. She starts off as a naive, wide eyed girl with pony tails but slowly evolves into a mature but hardened woman. Just the change in her makeup and hairstyling makes a massive difference to the viewers watching this story unfold. 

v – No matter how flawed the scripts are, Hum TV dramas are always well shot, directed and framed. Every scene defines the situation the characters find themselves in. Every tight framing from the window defines the claustrophobia our protagonist is experiencing at the time. Subtle visual elements like these keep the audience engaged with the show till the very end.

+ Low Points

i – Before I go any further into the critique of the show, the “copyright” elephant in the room needs to be addressed here. The entire drama series has been uploaded on Youtube for several years now and in every single episode, certain sections have been entirely muted due to “copyright issues”. Alright but then why is the dialogue muted as well? As most of us know, dialogue and music are two separate audio files and if HUM TV still holds the original editing files, would it not be possible just to mute certain copyrighted music sequences? My guess is either the original files do not exist anymore so they decided to just use the exported files to mute out entire audio sequences OR Hum TV was just too lazy to edit out from the original files. Either way, this is incredibly unprofessional and most of all, hurts the viewing of the show.

ii – This show did not deserve 24 episodes and clearly, should have ended 10 episodes ago. The creative team uses every dirty trick in the book to stretch and prolong the drama series and it became pretty stale half way through its run. There are countless scenes of Fareeda “meditating” her thoughts, repetition of the same dialogues we heard in the previous scene, long stretches of the soundtrack playing while absolutely nothing happens onscreen. This is absolutely no exaggeration that these “nothing happens” scenes take up at least five episode runtime for the entire show and that is just ludicrous! 

SPOILER!!! If you haven’t seen the show yet and do not want the plot twists to be spoiled, please skip to the ‘Overall’ section below:

iii – In the latter half of the series, the constant back and forth between Fareeda and Shaukat became so monotonous and predictable. Shaukat is a terrible husband and cheats on her, she snaps back at him and regrets her life choices. This dynamic is repeated one too many times and at least one expects a conclusion to all this but nope, nothing really happens. Fareeda accepts her misery while Shaukat somewhat (?) learns his lesson? What are we supposed to learn from all this? That success comes with a miserable private life? That people (including your own family) care for you only because of your wealth and success? Sure but where is the nuisance in all this? We know all of this. It’s not a big revelation that should make us sit through the entire 24 episode drama series.

iv – Digest Writer has another prominent side character which could have been a good “ally” for Fareeda but ends up being a disgruntled artist himself. And yes, I am talking about Khalid Ahmed as Mazhar Hayat. He starts off as a character who is being pushed around in the drama industry for being too “old fashioned” and a “has-been”. But when he finally gets a chance to show the industry what he can really do, Mazhar sahib takes his frustrations out on Fareeda instead. I do understand that there are a lot of veteran artists like Mazhar sahib who abuse upcoming artists to cement their ego but Fareeda already had numerous such characters in this show. Mazhar could have been a unique positive character in her life but ended up being exactly like the rest. This is not a knock for being “unrealistic” but lack of diversity within the show. 

v – Most of the cast of characters were unlikable. They are underwritten, shallow figures who are only there to either support or abuse Fareeda. They have no characteristics of their own. I cannot, for the life of me, explain what characteristics defined any of these people. The father starts off abusive but turns a new leaf once he learns that his daughter’s “hobby” can be profitable. Shaukat starts off as a lonely heart, desperate fool who wants to win the love of Fareeda but once accomplished, he immediately turns into an abusive psychopath. These sudden “character switch” moments are too jarring and make no real sense. We never get to see the world from their perspective, we never truly understand what makes Shaukat act the way he does. The entire cast of characters act the way they do is in service of the story and not the other way around.

vi – The original soundtrack is not bad per se but its overuse with every scene made me hate it when the show was over. Every meditative moment of Fareeda had the same soundtrack blasting in the background. It personally made me feel skipping such scenes entirely as I knew nothing will happen here and it’s not worth my time.

vii – And finally, we can talk about the “secret lover” of Fareeda; Agha Ali as Sheheryar. Even though her heart wanted to marry Sheheryar, her “obligations” to her family got the better of her. Later in the series, they coincidentally meet again and once again, confront their feelings for each other. But then, it turns out that Sheheryar also is not a “good person” to be with. So Fareeda calls it off once again. As a viewer, you are kind of left scratching your head as to why Sheheryar was reintroduced to the series just to cement the fact that he is “just like the rest of the men”. 

I like the fact that they bump into each other again but why not show him happily married with kids, quite possibly not in love with Fareeda anymore and that in turn, makes Fareeda realize the biggest mistake of her life. That perhaps, she should have defied her parents and went to the path of her personal happiness instead. I truly feel that Sheheryar’s character was mishandled in the end and ruined the show as well.

+ Overall

A great premise is wasted on repetitious storytelling and uninspired characterizations. Digest Writer could have been a unique show but ended up being a dud. 

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Mr. Khan’s Review on The Falcon and The Winter Soldier (2021)

A review on American Television miniseries, The Falcon and The Winter Soldier (2021). The 6 episode mini-series is directed by Kari Skogland and stars Anthony Mackie as Sam Wilson/ The Falcon and Sebastian Stan as James “Bucky” Barnes/ The Winter Soldier. The show is a continuation of the saga from the Marvel Cinematic Universe and is a Disney Plus Original series.

+ Crew

  • Directed by Kari Skogland
  • Cinematography by P.J. Dillon
  • Music by Henry Jackman
  • Produced by Ariella Blejer and Dawn Kamoche
  • Created by Malcolm Spellman
  • Production by Marvel Studios
  • Distributed by Disney Platform Distribution 

+ Note

The idea for The Falcon and The Winter Soldier was conceived not long after 2018 where the creators at Marvel Studios felt that side characters in the MCU could be further explored with the launch of Disney’s very own streaming service. The mastermind behind the Marvel Cinematic Universe Kevin Feige was fully onboard with the idea of Falcon and Winter Soldier having their own spinoff show. The previous films such as Captain America: The Winter Soldier (2014) and Captain America: Civil War (2016) displayed the talents of Anthony Mackie and Sebastian Stan budding heads together and starring their own “buddy cop”-esque show. But the show wanted to explore much beyond Superhero drama. As did Captain America: The Winter Soldier, the show was keen on exploring relevant, political topics of the present such as race, social class, refugees and the price for freedom. The Falcon and The Winter Soldier is also an exploration of the aftermath of Avengers: Endgame and its consequences on the rest of the humanity. 

The show is the second MCU TV series after WandaVision earlier in the year. The Falcon and The Winter Soldier was met with fairly positive reviews from critics and fans alike.

+ Main Cast

  1. Sebastian Stan as James “Bucky” Barnes / Winter Soldier 
  2. Anthony Mackie as Sam Wilson / Falcon 
  3. Wyatt Russell as John Walker 
  4. Erin Kellyman as Karli Morgenthau
  5. Danny Ramirez as Joaquin Torres
  6. Daniel Brühl as Helmut Zemo
  7. Emily VanCamp as Sharon Carter

+ Plot

After the retirement of Steve Rogers as Captain America, a void has appeared as to who will take up the mantle of the Stars and Stripes once again. Due to respect for Steve Rogers, Sam Wilson aka Falcon refuses the honor and decides to continue on as The Falcon. Meanwhile, Bucky Barnes aka The Winter Soldier is still suffering from his mysterious past as the Red Spy and is trying to search for answers in order to redeem himself. But when a new threat of Super Soldiers emerge and threaten to destroy the stability of the country, it is up to Falcon and Winter Soldier to join forces and save the day once again.

+ High Points

i – I have to admit, I didn’t have a lot of hope going into this show. As WandaVision’s premise intrigued me right from the get go, The Falcon and The Winter Soldier just felt retreading previous waters that MCU has displayed onto the silver screens time and time again. In short, this show felt like filler content for Disney’s new streaming service. But surprise surprise, the show turned out better than expected. The story pacing was good, there were some pivotal character development moments, some new characters also turned out great and could have a lot of potential as the MCU progresses into its Phase 4. Although the conclusion was a disappointment, the show is still definitely worth a watch if you find Marvel films entertaining and/ or have been a fan of the Captain America/ Russo Brothers espionage/ superhero action films.

SPOILER ALERT!: (From here on out, there will be spoilers for the show as it is impossible to discuss the plot points without spoiling anything. If you still haven’t seen the show and would like to see it, you can skip directly to Overall section)

ii – Ironically, the show is at its best when there are no action scenes, The banter/ character building moments between Falcon and Bucky are some of the best moments of the series. Both actors play well off one another and have fun chemistry in front of the camera. The Falcon and The Winter Soldier is essentially a buddy cop show between a clean cut protege of Captain America vs an ex enemy spy with a dubious past come together to fight a common threat and in the process, learn and inspire from each other’s flaws and merits.

iii – There are some story beats in The Falcon and The Winter Soldier that I just find excellent. Namely, John Walker aka the new Captain America. His story arc from introduction up until the 5th episode was excellently handled. The conflicts that he had to face in order to live up to the legacy of Steve Rogers is unfair but yet very real. Which makes it even more natural for him to succumb to the dark side. He is mostly never appreciated by his superhero counterparts and needs to improve fast in order to fight hand to hand combat with antagonists with super soldier serums. His evolution from a clean cut boy scout to eventually murdering someone in cold blood was brilliantly written (up till the last episode which I will get to soon).

iv – Daniel Brühl as Baron Zemo was just so much fun to watch. He provided a bit of levity but with a tragic, dramatic edge to it. Although in Captain America: Civil War, he was still mourning the loss of his family but now, he has learned to live with his pain and has a dark yet nihilistic look on life now.

v – The secrets uncovered behind the Super Soldier experiment and its continuation well into the 50s was a neat way to add layers to the overarching plot. The whole subplot of a Black Captain America in the first few episodes was great but entirely plausible look on America and its treatment of non-white citizens. The MCU may not be known for political commentary but when done right, can be incredibly rewarding.

vi – As was WandaVision, the production of the show is excellent and on par with the MCU feature length films. In comparison with DC’s CW Network shows are night and day. The production budget behind these shows are clear evidence that Disney has full faith in these shows continuing on the Marvel Cinematic Universe on a streaming platform.

+ Low Points

i – The final episode. The show had such a great setup but was squandered away for a safe, dull payoff. The action heavy scenes made the episode ironically dull to watch, the cringeworthy speech made by Falcon at the end was laughable at best and the Sharon Carter twist near the end was just… meh. Marvel really needs to learn how to finish a show on a high note. And that doesn’t necessarily mean that it all should be action driven nonsense. 

ii – John Walker’s turn to the “good side” at the end made absolutely no sense in terms of his previous character development. It felt forced and unnatural. The reason John Walker was an interesting character to begin with was his fall from grace, his muddled sense of morality, his failure to live up to the legacy of Steve Rogers as Captain America. We already have Falcon as Captain America now, why do we need another one (or as the show names him, U.S. Agent.. ugh). Without a shadow of a doubt, John Walker should have been revealed to be the main protagonist! Instead, we got stuck with….

iii –  A ginger girl who feels that her people have been mistreated and seeks revenge on a global scale. I appreciate that Marvel is trying something new but Erin Kellyman as Karli Morgenthau just unfortunately fails as the main antagonist of the show. There needed to be some more personal stakes at hand. In The Winter Soldier conclusion, Captain America had to face his long lost, brainwashed comrade Bucky Barnes in a final epic battle. They had personal history together which made the conclusion so much more entertaining to watch. And this is exactly the shoes John Walker could’ve filled in for an epic finale. Karli has nothing much going for her and is a complete letdown to the rest of the show.

iv – Even though I praised the production value above, when it comes to creativity, it is definitely passe and insipid. There is not one single sequence or shot that I could remember that I found inspiring. The visuals are pretty much forgettable. And also the shaky cam during fight scenes don’t help.

v – Which brings me to the fight choreography. I wish I could comment on it if I actually understood what was happening during those fight scenes. A single shot stays not long enough for the viewer to grasp exactly what is happening. A barrage of quick edits makes the visuals disorienting and a massive blur at the end of the scene.

vi – I sincerely feel that Marvel needs to move slightly away from the status quo. Take more risk with their properties. Just as Guardian Of The Galaxy or the Avengers: Infinity War were. It will be evidently a lot more rewarding in the long run. Many non Marvel fans complain that the ‘Marvel formula’ never really gives room for creativity. And judging by this show, I can’t disagree with them.

+ Overall

Even though The Falcon and The Winter Soldier starts off very promising, all the hype gets fizzled out with a safe but disappointing conclusion to the show. But regardless of its obvious shortcomings,The Falcon and The Winter Soldier is still an entertaining watch.

Rate : 3.0 out of 5 stars